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anaika kakoty's avatar

such a nice poem!! I feel for the gardener and garden

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Noha Beshir's avatar

Goosebumps!!! I love the back and forth.

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Najah Amatullah's avatar

This is dope. Even though you said it was a conversation, I didn’t expect the garden to talk back. What a beautiful lesson! It could be a metaphor for so many things.

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Bethany Nicole's avatar

Thank you so much for this. And you’re right about the multiple métaphores here. Thank you again for reading. 💜

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Dr. Mary M. Marshall's avatar

I felt this Bethany. Nice. 🦋🌻

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Bethany Nicole's avatar

Thank you so so much 🙏🏾

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rose j. percy's avatar

BARS.

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Bethany Nicole's avatar

You gas me and I LOVE it 🥰 thank you, Rose. 🌹

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Leon Brown, Jr.'s avatar

Really nice poem, Bethany!

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Bethany Nicole's avatar

Leon i appreciate you so much.

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